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TNC Ch. 1 Pg 3 :redone: by Ebonycloud-Graphics TNC Ch. 1 Pg 3 :redone: by Ebonycloud-Graphics
Been working on this for forever... I sorta like how it turned out. For those of us who been around since I started this comic you will notice that the new redone pages are taking it a bit slower to introduce the characters and the plot line. I want to do that so we have better context for the characters and they arent all rushed in on to screen. Chapter one will be longer than 22 pages once I finish redoing at the pages. YOu may also notice a strange change in background, line style or whatever while I revamp these pages ;D Forgive me for that!

This page wont be linked to the original pages until I managed to get them to make sense together ;D

(The Next Page isnt going to make much sense right now so until I get the next few pages in I wont be linking the redone first page to this one ;D)
Next Page - To be uploaded whenever
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iSwiftfire Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
tigerlilly is my fav ;D
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firestarnight Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student Digital Artist
i love the awesome emo flip tigerlily has :)
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ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
what happened to windclan?
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:iconebonycloud-graphics:
Ebonycloud-Graphics Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Same thing that happened to all the clans, which is they all died ^^"
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ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
how????
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:iconashfurinstarclan:
ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
(whos the brown cat?)
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:iconebonycloud-graphics:
Ebonycloud-Graphics Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Tigerlily ^^
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:iconashfurinstarclan:
ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
wow...shes pritty :3
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Ebonycloud-Graphics Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Well thank ya! ;D
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:iconashfurinstarclan:
ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
ur such a good drawer...im so sad ur stoping drawing for a while it made me sad *sniffles*
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:iconebonycloud-graphics:
Ebonycloud-Graphics Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Its only for a little while ;D Just letting my arm rest ^^
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:iconashfurinstarclan:
ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
well i hope ur arm gets better soon :D your comics are my life
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ashfurinstarclan Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
i wish i could draw like u can :D
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Shadow-Demon-Zair Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
I'm aware others have pointed this out, but have you considered making the cats chins a bit smaller? Especially on the females, because it really makes them a little too male-looking, and it distracts me from really enjoying the whole comic when I keep concentrating on it. ^^;
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1Bramble123 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
I like Tigerlily's expression, she looks really bummed out.
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CartoonFan18 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love Tigerlily's expression in the last panel. You can really feel the emotion.

I also like how you redid this page with less words. Makes it flow better and less confusing :3
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xXLeafberryXx Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
Tigerlily looks awesome there :la:
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Rachel-the-zarbax Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
Nicely done! :)
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DappledSun Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I need to find out what program you use! >.> i can only get my characters to look so clean when I draw them out by hand, and even then, there are issues. I use photoshop for my digital works, but, anyway, I like the new page!~ Ghostclaw looks SO adorable XD (yes I like Ghostclaw he's my favorite, ahhh so carefree)
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Ebonycloud-Graphics Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I use GIMP 2 which is like Photoshop but less awesome ;D The lines are smooth because I use the pathway tool with the thickness set to 1.6 ^^

And thanks! Ghosty is so much fun to draw! XD
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DappledSun Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmm pathway tool, I'm going to start looking this stuff up XD but cool! I love photoshop. It's a good program ^^

And no problem he looks like a fun character to draw XD
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TwilightLuv10 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh dear
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:iconmaplespyder:
MapleSpyder Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha, I saw your comic since page two on the forums. <3 Great job:)
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MysteryKittenThe1st Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You've really improved! I'm serious!!! It's great!!!
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Satyrtail Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww how nice! I love Tigerlily's expression on the last panel :iconiloveitplz:
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higurashifan4 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Bircfallstar Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student General Artist
It looks really really nice! Maybe I should consider re-doing some pages in my comic. But that might take awhile and then pretty soon they will be old again >A< My style is still constantly changing!!
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Fernsway Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I still like the old pages. I like the newer redone pages, but I still do like the old ones...

Good job! Im noticeing Tigerlily and Ghosteh look younger.
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Madkazer Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Filmographer
I think this looks pretty good. The frames make sense and it doesn't feel rushed. Keep up the good work =D
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Luoka Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
Is this the first comment? If so, cool~ XD

I like how this turned out. :) But it seems like your style of drawing these cats have changed... a bit... or maybe it's just me. :P
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Ebonycloud-Graphics Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh the style is very different from how it originally was. The reason i am updating the pages is mostly so the story and the art style flows a little better. Not sure if its working but whatever right? XD
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Luoka Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
Oh. So it wasn't just me. xD

Well, I CAN say that is IS flowing better. Even if it's only a little bit. ^^

Right~
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