Been working on this for forever... I sorta like how it turned out. For those of us who been around since I started this comic you will notice that the new redone pages are taking it a bit slower to introduce the characters and the plot line. I want to do that so we have better context for the characters and they arent all rushed in on to screen. Chapter one will be longer than 22 pages once I finish redoing at the pages. YOu may also notice a strange change in background, line style or whatever while I revamp these pages ;D Forgive me for that!
This page wont be linked to the original pages until I managed to get them to make sense together ;D
(The Next Page isnt going to make much sense right now so until I get the next few pages in I wont be linking the redone first page to this one ;D)
Next Page - To be uploaded whenever
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