TNC Chapter 3 Pg 5

So I have decided, from now on I'm going to put a novel form version of my comic in my comment area starting with this pages so that those of us who have a really hard time figuring things out can get it easier. It might be hard to understand whats going on due to my lack of ability to get things across clearly ^^" Anyway, here we go!

The orange tom's head tilted to the side as a knowing and whimsical smile passed over his lips, "You always were stubborn, even as my deputy."
Duskstar stepped forward, her brows knitting together at the tone in her old leaders voice, "Flamestar-"
"Duskstar!" Her sentence was cut short with a loud outburst from Ratstar. The dark gray tom stepped forward, his voice was a deep throaty growl, "By refusing to comply you are going to force us to take drastic measures." Duskstar's mouth pulled in to a defiant frown at the older Starclan cat's words. Despite that Ratstar continued forward. "Paint us as the bad guys if it suits your fancy," his face just inches from her, "But remember this..."


Anyone feeling a slight bit of UST between Ratstar and Duskstar? It might just be me... XD If you have no idea what UST is then dont worry about it ;D

~Edit~
I know there is no space between your and fancy but its better than not having the R at all... I had to add it cause I forgot cause I suck XD

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